一些学生在托福作文时，一直只顾及如何加些经典句，如何愈加写好结构，却忘了一些更为基础的问题。其实，在托福写作中用防止一些容易见到小问题的方法，才能让文章更为完美。下面我们就为大伙，整理了10种最易在文中产生的错误。
学会容易见到的10种错误为你的托福写作提分
1、不同
所谓不同不光指主谓不同，它还包含了数的不同、时态不同及代词不同等。
例1. When one have money , he can do what he want to.
人一旦有了钱，他就能想做什么就做什么。
分析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has; 同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不同。
改为：once one has money , he can do what he wants
2、修饰语错位
英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不一样的地方，句子的意思可能引起变化。对于这一点中国学生总是没引起足够的看重，因而导致了非必须的误解。
例1、 I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.
分析：better地方不当，应置于句末。
3、句子不完整
在口语中，交际双方可借用手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解。可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这样的情况常常发生在主句写完将来，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生。
例1、There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.
分析：本句后半部分for example by TV, radio , newspaper and so on .不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词汇，不可以独立成句。
改为：There are many ways to know society, for example, by TV, radio, and newspaper.
4、悬垂修饰语
所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清。
比如：At the age of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中at the age of ten只点出十岁时，但没说明 哪个十岁时。按通常推理不可能是my grandfather，假如大家把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点，全句就不那样费解了。
改为：When I was ten, my grandfather died.
例1、To do well in college, good grades are essential.
分析：句中不定式短语 to do well in college 的逻辑主语不了解。
改为：To do well in college, a student needs good grades.
5、词性误用
词性误用常表现为：介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等。
例1、None can negative the importance of money.
分析：negative 系形容词，误作动词。
改为：None can deny the importance of money.
6、指代不清
指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不同。试看下面这一句：
Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
玛丽和我姐姐非常要好，由于她要她做她的伴娘。
读完上面这一句话，读者没办法明确地判断两位女孩中哪个将结婚，哪个将当伴娘。假如大家把易于引起误解的代词的所指对象加以明确，意思就一清二楚了。这个句子可改为：
Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
例1、And we can also know the society by serving it yourself.
分析：句中人称代词we 和反身代词yourself指代不同。
改为：We can also know society by serving it ourselves.
7、不间断句子
什么叫run-on sentence? 请看下面的例句。
例1. There are many ways we get to know the outside world.
分析：这个句子包括了两层完整的意思：There are many ways。 与We get to know the outside world。。容易地把它们连在一块就不妥当了。
改为：There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world. 或：There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world.
8、措词问题
Diction 是指在特定的句子中怎么样适合地使用词汇的问题，囿于教学时间紧迫，教师平常在这方面花的时间总是极其有限，影响了学生在写作中没培养好的推敲，斟酌的习惯。他们总是随性，拿来就用。所以作文中用词不当的错误比比皆是。
例1、The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.
农业方面化学物质用的不断增加也导致了污染。
分析：显然，考生把obstacles障碍，障碍物误作substance物质了。另外the increasing use 应改为abusive use 。
改为：The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.
9、累赘
言以简单为贵。写句子没一个多余的词;写段落没一个无必要的句子。可以用单词的不需要词组;可以用词组的不需要从句或句子。如：In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him.
本句的the fact that he is lazy系同谓语从句，大家根据上述可以用词组的不需要从句
可以改为：In spite of his laziness, I like him.
例1、For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.
分析：整个句子可以大大简化。
改为：Diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need.
10、不连贯
不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语，或是结构上不畅通。这也是考生常犯的问题。
例1. The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.
分析：The fresh water 与逗号后的it 不连贯。It 与things 在数方面不同。
改为：Fresh water is the most important thing in the world.
以上为大伙收拾的就是平常在托福写作过程中，最易出现的一些问题，大伙可以拿源于己写过的文章来比对一下，期望有所收益哦。
托福写作：能提分的常用词汇
托福写作中，掌握巧用一些能为文章增光添彩的词汇是获得高分的方法之一，下面我们就为大伙整理大全了10个托福写作中最常见的词汇，期望能对各位同学的复习有所启发。
1、Challenge
Challenge sb to do sth .向...挑战，邀请...比赛
They challenge us to a swimming contest.
to give a challenge 挑战
2、Share
Share 部分，分
Everybody ought to have his proper share.
Share 参与、贡献
I had no share in the mater.
Share 分配，共有
They shared the profits between them.
I will share with you in the undertaking.
3、Instead
instead 代替
If you cannot go,let him go instead.
instead of 代替
I will go instead of you.
4、Manage
manage to do 完成，达成
We finally managed to get there in time.
manage with 办事，处现事务
We cant manage with these poor tools.
manage on 生活，过活
How will she manage with her husband gone.
5、Afford
afford to do 足以承担
I cannot afford to pay such a high price.
afford 产生
Reading affords pleasure.
6、Rather
would rather do 宁可
He said he would rather stay at home.
rather than 宁可
I had rather dance than eat.
7、Ever
ever 过去
Have you ever been there?
ever 到底
Why ever didnt you go.
ever 假如
If the bandever plays again,we will dance.
ever so=very
Thank you ever so much.
8、Available
available 通用的，有效的
The season ticket is available for three months.
available 可用的，可达到的
9、Else
else 除此之外，别的
Where else did you go?
else 不然，不然
Hurry,else youll be late.
10、Involve
involve 包含
Housekeeping involves cooking, washing dishes, sweeping and cleaning.
involve 使陷于
One foolish mistake can involve you in a good deal of trouble.
involve 使纠缠，使难得
A sentence that is involved is hard to understand.
involve 包围
Clouds involved the hillTOP.
